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    Redacción de inglés

    ¿Podeis decirme si está más o menos bien? No me refiero a la estructura que es lo de menos, sino a las formas verbales, vocabulario y demás.

    Aún tengo que hacer otras 3 redacciones más, así que si alguna se aburre ya las pondré xDD

    ADAM LEVINE

    His name is Adam Noah Levine; he was born on March 3rd 1979 in Los Angeles, California. He is the vocalist, guitarist and compositor of a musical band called Maroon 5.
    Adam started to show his musical talent when he was in school. He learning guitar in High School and playing music whenever he could. He grew up playing the guitar.
    Adam formed a band with three of his school mates, Jesse, Ryan and Mickey.
    From school band to the music industry, his band kept strong and produced long lines of music. Formerly known as Kara’s flowers, in 1995 "The fourth world" was their proper debut for Reprise, a favourite in the college market, but a change of direction was ahead. Kara’s flowers was a modern rock band.
    They left Reprise in 1999 and renamed themselves Maroon 5 with the addition of a guitarist, James Valentine. Maroon 5, mixed rock, funk, soul and R&B.
    Adam and his band have stormed the charts with "Harder to breathe" and "This love".
    Their first album was Songs about Jane, the compositor of all songs was Adam, he wrote these songs when his girlfriend left him. The songs are memories of her.
    The band had invite to television programs so "The show of Jay Leno" or "Saturday night live".
    Also, they recorded "Woman", to de original soundtrack for "Spiderman 2" and on June, they showed and acoustic record called "1.22.03 Acoustic".


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    His name is Adam Noah Levine; he was born on March 3rd 1979 in Los Angeles, California. He is the vocalist, guitarist and compositor of a musical band called Maroon 5.
    Adam started to show his musical talent when he was in school. He learning guitar in High School and playing music whenever he could. He grew up playing the guitar.
    Adam formed a band with three of his school mates, Jesse, Ryan and Mickey.
    From school band to the music industry, his band kept strong and produced long lines of music. Formerly known as Kara’s flowers, in 1995 "The fourth world" was their proper debut for Reprise, a favourite in the college market, but a change of direction was ahead. Kara’s flowers was a modern rock band.
    They left Reprise in 1999 and renamed themselves Maroon 5 with the addition of a guitarrist, James Valentine. Maroon 5, mixed rock, funk, soul and R&B.
    Adam and his band have stormed the charts with "Harder to breathe" and "This love".
    Their first album was Songs about Jane, the compositor who wrote all songs was Adam, he wrote these songs when his girlfriend left him. The songs are memories about her.
    The band had been invite to television programs so "The show of Jay Leno" or "Saturday night live".
    Also, they recorded "Woman", to de original soundtrack for "Spiderman 2" and in June, they showed and acoustic record called "1.22.03 Acoustic".

    Esta mas o menos bien, aunq que te corregido alguna cosilla, espero que te sirva de algo
    Say it's true, there's nothing like me and you

    I'm not alone, tell me you feel it too

    And I would run away

    I would run away with you

    Cause I am falling in love with you

    [...]

    Close the door, lay down upon the snow

    And by candlelight, make love to me through the night





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    Gracias sabía yo que alguna forma verbal se me escapaba xD


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    Si queréis echarle un ojo a esta xD está fatal ya aviso jeje.


    To: pnl@yahoo.uk

    From: animor_87@hotmail.com

    Subject: Hello!



    Hello! How are you?

    My name is Romina and I’ll be your new penfriend. I’m from Spain and I’m 18 years old.
    I live in a flat with my parents in a small city called Mieres. I’ve got a brother. He’s oldest than me, his name’s Javier but he lives in another flat with my grandparents. Have you got any brother o sister?

    I like animals; I’ve got two cats and a dog. Do you have any pet?
    Also, I like music. My favourite groups and singers are Maroon 5, Eminem, Simple plan , Green Day … What kind of music do you like?
    What do you do in your free time? At weekends, I always going out to the disco with my friends, I going out to 16:00 from 03:00. From Monday to Friday, I always staying at home, sometimes listening to music or watching TV and sometimes playing with computer and sailing on Internet.

    What did you do on summer holidays? I stayed in Mieres but I went to the beach with my family three or four times. It was very boring.

    Well, I leave you now. See you soon.

    Best wishes: Romina


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    Dear (nombre de tu amiga),
    Hello! How are you?

    My name is Romina and I’ll be your new penfriend. I’m from Spain and I’m 18 years old.
    I live in a flat with my parents in a town called Mieres. I’ve got a brother. He’s oldest than me, his name’s Javier but he lives in another flat with my grandparents. Have you got any brother o sister?

    I like animals; I’ve got two cats and a dog. Do you have any pet?
    Also, I like listening to music. My favourite groups and singers are Maroon 5, Eminem, Simple plan , Green Day … What kind of music do you like?
    What do you do in your free time? At weekends, I always I go out to, I like goingto the disco with my friends, I go out from 4:00 pm to 03:00.am From Monday to Friday, I always stay at home, sometimes Ilisten to music or watch TV and sometimes I play computer and sail on Internet.

    What did you do on summer holidays? I stayed in Mieres but I went to the beach with my family three or four times. It was very boring.

    Well, I leave you now. See you soon.

    Best wishes: Romina / Yours faithfully

    Las cosas que te he corregido estan en cursi, no te preocupes porke no esta mal del todo, solo que alguna te las he cambiado para que quede mejor, como la hora y eso, que los ingleses no entienden de 16h 17h a ellos ay q decirles 4pm 5pm etc xD q sino se pierden. Y lo de small city te lo e cambiao por town porke keda mejor yo creo, ya que city para ellos es una gran ciudad
    besos!
    Say it's true, there's nothing like me and you

    I'm not alone, tell me you feel it too

    And I would run away

    I would run away with you

    Cause I am falling in love with you

    [...]

    Close the door, lay down upon the snow

    And by candlelight, make love to me through the night





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    Qué "ilu" ver una redacción sobre Adam , el año pasado yo también hice una sobre él en inglés ^^

    PD: Ya sé que mi mensaje no tiene que ver con el tema, pero tenía que decirlo xD

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    Cinderella escribió:
    Qué "ilu" ver una redacción sobre Adam , el año pasado yo también hice una sobre él en inglés ^^

    PD: Ya sé que mi mensaje no tiene que ver con el tema, pero tenía que decirlo xD
    Jeje, es que media clase la iba a hacer sobre Fernando Alonso, entonces como que no xD


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    lo siento si es un poco tarde, es que no lo habia visto jejeje

    Hello! How are you?

    My name is Romina and I’ll be your new penfriend. I’m from Spain and I’m 18 years old.
    I live in a flat with my parents in a small city called Mieres. I have a brother. He’s older than me, his name’s Javier but he lives in another flat with my grandparents. Have you got any brothers o sisters?

    I like animals; I have two cats and a dog. Do you have any pets?
    I also like music. My favourite groups and singers are Maroon 5, Eminem, Simple plan , Green Day … What kind of music do you like?
    What do you do in your free time? In the weekend, I always go to the disco with my friends, I go out from 4:00 pm to 3:00am. From Monday to Friday, I always stay at home, sometimes listening to music or watching TV and sometimes playing with the computer and sailing on Internet.

    What did you do on your summer holidays? I stayed in Mieres but I went to the beach with my family three or four times. It was very boring.

    Well, I leave you now. See you soon.

    Best wishes: Romina
    ''methinks, 'tis strange vou can't afford one pitying look, one parting word: humanity claims this as due, but what's humanity to you? Cruel man! i am not blind your infidelity i find: your want of love my ruin shows my broken heart your broken vows. Yet maugre all your rigid hate I will be true in spite of fate and one preeminence i'll claim: to be forever still the same. Show me a man that dare to be true that dares to suffer what i do: that can for ever sigh unheard and ever love without regard: I then will own your prior claim to love, to honour and to fame: but till that time, my dear, adieu, i yet superior am to you''



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    HIJAdePELAYO escribió:
    ¿Podeis decirme si está más o menos bien? No me refiero a la estructura que es lo de menos, sino a las formas verbales, vocabulario y demás.

    Aún tengo que hacer otras 3 redacciones más, así que si alguna se aburre ya las pondré xDD


    ADAM LEVINE




    His name is Adam Noah Levine; he was born on March 3rd 1979 in Los Angeles, California. He is the vocalist, guitarist and compositor of a musical band called Maroon 5.
    Adam started to show his musical talent when he was in school. He learning guitar in High School and playing music whenever he could. He grew up playing the guitar.
    Adam formed a band with three of his school mates, Jesse, Ryan and Mickey.
    From school band to the music industry, his band kept strong and produced long lines of music. Formerly known as Kara’s flowers, in 1995 "The fourth world" was their proper debut for Reprise, a favourite in the college market, but a change of direction was ahead. Kara’s flowers was a modern rock band.
    They left Reprise in 1999 and renamed themselves Maroon 5 with the addition of a guitarist, James Valentine. Maroon 5, mixed rock, funk, soul and R&B.
    Adam and his band have stormed the charts with "Harder to breathe" and "This love".
    Their first album was Songs about Jane, the compositor of all songs was Adam, he wrote these songs when his girlfriend left him. The songs are memories of her.
    The band had invite to television programs so "The show of Jay Leno" or "Saturday night live".
    Also, they recorded "Woman", to de original soundtrack for "Spiderman 2" and on June, they showed and acoustic record called "1.22.03 Acoustic".
    Si no me dice que no la escribí yo... vale, alguna frase la copie porque no sabía como ponerla con mis palabras, pero el resto lo hice yo solita, es más, más de la mitad del texto estaba en castellano, pues no me calificó.


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