¿Podeis decirme si está más o menos bien? No me refiero a la estructura que es lo de menos, sino a las formas verbales, vocabulario y demás.
Aún tengo que hacer otras 3 redacciones más, así que si alguna se aburre ya las pondré xDD
His name is Adam Noah Levine; he was born on March 3rd 1979 in Los Angeles, California. He is the vocalist, guitarist and compositor of a musical band called Maroon 5.
Adam started to show his musical talent when he was in school. He learning guitar in High School and playing music whenever he could. He grew up playing the guitar.
Adam formed a band with three of his school mates, Jesse, Ryan and Mickey.
From school band to the music industry, his band kept strong and produced long lines of music. Formerly known as Kara’s flowers, in 1995 "The fourth world" was their proper debut for Reprise, a favourite in the college market, but a change of direction was ahead. Kara’s flowers was a modern rock band.
They left Reprise in 1999 and renamed themselves Maroon 5 with the addition of a guitarist, James Valentine. Maroon 5, mixed rock, funk, soul and R&B.
Adam and his band have stormed the charts with "Harder to breathe" and "This love".
Their first album was Songs about Jane, the compositor of all songs was Adam, he wrote these songs when his girlfriend left him. The songs are memories of her.
The band had invite to television programs so "The show of Jay Leno" or "Saturday night live".
Also, they recorded "Woman", to de original soundtrack for "Spiderman 2" and on June, they showed and acoustic record called "1.22.03 Acoustic".